P4

Learners pitch their ideas, treatments and sample pre-production materials for original audio-visual products to a producer, client or focus group for feedback

Presentation One: Digitized

Presentation Recording
Presentation Script:

Presentation Two: The Death of Projection

Presentation Recording:


Presentation Script:

PRESENTATION ONE FEEDBACK:

Quality of Visuals & Concept 
The visuals effectively communicate the concept and style of the documentary. The mode was identified.

Quality of test footage
Stylisation of the footage is clear and links to the subject. The quality is industry standard.

Quality of speech 
Well-rehearsed but a bit quiet.

Improvements 
Include a questionnaire/script for the interviewees.

Target Audience
The audience is clearly identified and the concept relates to them.
  

IMPROVEMENTS:

PRESENTATION TWO FEEDBACK:

Quality of Visuals & Concept 
The visuals effectively communicate the concept and style of the documentary. The mode was identified and relates to the style.

Quality of test footage
The quality is industry standard and the stylisation of the footage is clear and links to the subject. However, in one of the interviews, the interviewee was looking directly at the camera.

Quality of speech 
Well-rehearsed and confident. 

Improvements 
Include a questionnaire/script for the interviewees.

Target Audience
Fits with the concept of the documentary.


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